Little-Eise's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[M&A]

I dig the more complicated pose you chose for the woman in the back; frankly, I almost want to see her by herself. It isn't that the other figure's pose is less interesting, but more that she leads your eye out of the composition. Which isn't helped by the curvilinear lines in the background; lead your eye out of the picture just as much, if not more than, the front woman.

The women themselves are, for the most part, really well rendered. My complaint is with each of the women's hair. Honestly, their hair is the first thing I noticed; the saturated colors you used in the hair contrast greatly with everything else in the picture. By itself, that isn't a bad thing; it's a great way to create focal points. Unfortunately their hair isn't as well rendered as the rest of their bodies, which breaks the realism found in the rest of each figure.

That isn't to say that I don't like the picture; I just kept getting pulled out of the picture or too distracted to appreciate how well rendered each of the figures are.

[What Does Your Soul Look Like]

I'm really loving the sense of movement throughout the entire picture, but specifically in her body. The shading is awesome; I like the whole fire/ energy theme you have going on. Anatomy-wise I only have a couple complaints: her left foot seems a bit big and her right hand is a bit less realistic than her left. It kind of looks like the fingers on her right hand are made of noodles.

Overall, though, I really like this piece. The composition and color choice are great, and, apart from the things I pointed out about the anatomy, the figure is really well made.