The more I stare at these two, the more impossible Maya's spine looks. Backs just can't bend that far backwards; a vertebrae would be breaking every time Lilith gyrates into Maya.
The contrast between how you handled their bodies and their clothes really piqued my interest. I think it's a good way to call attention to their bodies without making them completely nude. They almost seem more naked because they are partially clothed.
As a side point, Maya's expression kind of made me laugh; I can't tell if she's aroused or just annoyed.
Haha awesome, I was sort of going for that since I don't like that she's essentially replacing Lilith :P
I'm really loving the sense of movement throughout the entire picture, but specifically in her body. The shading is awesome; I like the whole fire/ energy theme you have going on. Anatomy-wise I only have a couple complaints: her left foot seems a bit big and her right hand is a bit less realistic than her left. It kind of looks like the fingers on her right hand are made of noodles.
Overall, though, I really like this piece. The composition and color choice are great, and, apart from the things I pointed out about the anatomy, the figure is really well made.
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